RadRacer's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Masterpiece of Epic Proportion]

very good!

the only suggestion i can think of would be to make some of the transiotions between your riffs smoother rather than always fading out of the old riff, making a few bridging dealies inbetween them would sound better i think. Just a future consideration as this song is pretty kickass and i wouldn't bother changing it if i was you

Claytron responds:

Thanks! I agree with the linking, I think itll be changed, but I dont think ill reupload it.

That for the review!

[Stabby McStab Stab]

yeah

the intro was kind of sloppily played, it sounded like you don't quite have ur finger pressed hard enough on the fret so you get a sort of muffled sound. The next riff (beefed up version of the last) was very good however, and the song just got better from then on. I especially love the part where the first riff is played again and you have a sort of jazzy guitar overtop of it, that was sheer briliance!

Claytron responds:

Awsome! Once again thanks for the good review.

[The Purity]

good stuffs

The drums were really well done IMHO. Good stuff man, a little too slow for me but it was a very groovin track. Post about your song in the audio adverstiment thread in the audio forum to get more reviews . . . the solo thing near the end sounded kinda choppy to me, try to make it sound more fluid by using hammerons and pulloffs and slides and stuff. Good song!

Claytron responds:

Thanks, it good to see that you review and give advice when you listen to songs! You dont see it much, ill post some advertisements later this week!
The drums were computer generated though, but I agree that they kick ass for a computer..

Thanks!

[Oro vs. Dzex: Round 1]

yeahhhhh

love that sailing guitar man, fuckin cool. make it longer!!

[Vengeful Trajectory]

really good

Really good, i quite liked it. Everything seemed to work out good in it, don't really have any advice for you cuz u seem to be doing good by yourself. Keep on rockin in the free world

Lakas responds:

thanks

[Finding Light in Darkness]

Really liked it

it was just too damn short man! This would be a really sweet part of a song, like a heavy (not super heavy more like megadeth or metallica heavy) song where it all of a sudden just slows down into this melodic calming little thing. I dunno i think im ranting but what i meant to say was good song

[Tankmen Destroyers of All]

thanks fer fuckin me over

i dont even wanna submit my tankmen song now as it'll just look extra shitty next to this one. HAha o wells, great song man pure excellence I love that kinda metal sweeping guitar solo after guitar solo, and your playing is absolutely amazing by the way. How long you been workin at this thing we call a guitar?

Metaljonus responds:

Haha, thanks for the kind words man. I've been playing for 11yrs.

[Lay It Down]

decent

yeah singings too quiet in parts, and lyrics would be nice instead of just whooawhoawhoas thruout the song. Kind of weird, too happy for me nothing i would ever listen to in real life unless i was really stoned or something. Im sure other people will really like it tho

nightvision responds:

It's sounding like my vocals were a negative thing, rather than a positive.

Thanks for the feedback.

[8-9-10]

static problem

fuck i hate static, i get it whenever i record an acoustic song too. I liked the intro riff, but it sounded like you screwed up a bit while playing the slower version of it. Your voice was also off tune, but the more you sing the better you will get at it im sure. These are just suggestions/critisisms i actually quite liked the song, especially the "cuz I . . . hate em all" part that was nicely timed.

Ltblackshadow responds:

Yeh man the static!! AH! But I couldnt do much about it but try to let it by. I wish I had acid pro or sumtin to like fix the stuff up. Yeh :/ If ur interested about the music u could look us up on myspace. Just leave me a message or sumtin on newgrounds. Thanks for the review again x_x

[Blank Paper Story]

twas okay

The bass guitar was too strong in parts of the song, im all up for a loud bass guitar . . . but it was played pretty mediocrly(spelling?) in parts. The singing is alright, but it sounds like your holding back . . . dont. I think the lyrics were well written, and had a nice melody to them that fit in with the guitar nicely. Basically its a well written song, just not recorded very good my suggestion is to play it more and more and sing it more (even in the car or shower just belt it out) to build up your confidence in the song as it could be really great if preformed better

Ltblackshadow responds:

Yeh it was the first take. Me and my friend didnt have anymore time to finish up another take so it didnt work out. We just made a two person band for fun cause we hang out alot so might as well. We are originally in a band. But we recorded this at her house. Usually we have a recordin studio at our other friends house who has more "proffesional" set. But yeh thanks for the review. I really appreciate it =D